Sunday, June 28, 2009

Season 1 - Blogisode 6: Disclosure

Eddy (he is the twin too)


2 a.m.

Everyone is in bed but they were shocked to hear the doorbell rang too many times. Who the hell would come in the middle of the night. Then, the door is knocked. It sounds like the person was trying to break down the door.

Amirul: What in the world?

They went to the kitchen and everyone took a knife. Muiz gets the door and point the knife to that person. There stand a teenage boy, gasping for air.

Muiz: Who are you? If you don't leave now, I'm calling the cops!
Issany: Wait, no! Can I come in? Please. I'll explain to you inside. It's about Eddy.
Amirul: Issany?
Muiz: You know him?
Amirul: Yeah, he works for Afiqah, the detective.
Muiz: Really?! Why didn't you tell me earlier. If you did, I don't have to waste my time intimidating you.
Amirul: Please, come in.
Issany: Thanks!

They sat in the living room and Shakira prepared drinks for everyone.

Shakira: Here you go.
Issany: You don't have to. I'm not gonna be here for long.
Shakira: It's okay. You sure look tired. Have some drink.
Issany: Okay. thank you, ma'am.
Amirul: Did you run here?
Issany: Yes. I was followed but I manage to loose them.
Amirul: Why did they followed after you, son?
Issany: I left my backpack at the office last night so I went back to get it just now because all my work is in there. As I enter the office, I heard people talking in Afiqah's office. When I peek inside, there's Afiqah and a guy who came last Monday. I think his name is Naqib. I recorded their conversation.

Issany took out his digital audio recorder and played it.

Naqib: Did you take care of it? What if the cops know about this?
Afiqah: I don't know. I've hid all the evidence. I can't believe he's still alive.
Naqib: Me too. How come? I thought we killed him. I still remembered we burried his body.
Afiqah: I did too. How can I forget the face of the man I killed.
Naqib: Damn you, Eddy! Now, I can't marry Syafinaz.
Naqib: What was that? You're sure there's no one here?
Afiqah: Yes, positive. I've checked.
Issany(whispering): Oh, shit!

It stopped. Issany continued his story.

Issany: Then, Naqib and Afiqah went out of the room. So, I ran. They saw me. Naqib sent his men to chase after me. At a corner, there's two guys helped me. Then, I ran here with all my strength left.
Amirul: So, this means that they killed Eddy?
Issany: Well, that sounds like it.
Amirul: Wow, I can't believe it!
Muiz: I'm calling the cops.
Hajar: Hmm, no wonder this case never been solved.
Shakira: Where's mom?
Hajar: I think she went to the kitchen just now.
Shakira: Go and look for her.

Hajar went to the kitchen but Syafinaz wasn't there. She saw the back door is opened. She went back to the living room to tell the others.

Suddenly, there was someone knocking on the door. Hajar gets the door and she saw Syafinaz with Naqib and Afiqah. Naqib put his arms around Syafinaz's neck and pointed a gun at her head. Then, Afiqah grabbed Hajar and did the same thing as Naqib.

Naqib: Everyone, drop on the floor! Throw those knife here or we'll blow their head.
Hajar: Don't exaggerate. We all know that you're not going to do it.
Naqib: Don't test me, kid.
Hajar: Well, I want to. Go ahead you chick-een!
(Afiqah shoot Hajar's arm)
Hajar: OUCH!
Naqib: I've warned you.
Amirul: Why did you do all this Afiqah?
Afiqah: Cause I love Eddy! We were almost married that time but suddenly, he said that he's going to marry someone else. So, I made a deal with Naqib because he wanted Eddy to be out of the picture too.
Amirul: But, that's not right. They were forced to get married. He doesn't really have a choice. It's not his fault. Didn't Naqib tell you this?
Afiqah: Well, it's too late now. Just, shut up!
Hajar: Can we please get the first aid and stop my bleeding? Please...
Afiqah: Shut the fuck up!
Hajar: Hey, don't use the'f' word in here, biatch!
Afiqah: I've had enough with you. I'm gonna blow your head.
Syafinaz: NO! Please no. If you want to, do it to me. She's still young.
Afiqah: Okay.
Naqib: Don't you dare. We made a deal.
Afiqah: But, you lied to me. That breaks the deal.
Muiz: Are you guys finish?
Naqib+Afiqah: What?!
Muiz: Actually, I called the cops just before you guys came in. So, they're gonna be here in no time.

Then, there's two guys came into the house quietly through the open door. They both knock Naqib's and Afiqah's head with rocks. They passed out. Those two guys are actually Eddy and his twin brother. Naqib and Afiqah were tied together.

Syafinaz: Eddy? Is that you?
Eddy: Yes, it is.
Syafinaz: But, how?
Eddy: What actually happen is, I was saved by my twin. They did shoot me but they were stupid enough not to check my pulse. When they burried me, my twin followed them. Then, after they left, he dug up the place I was burried. No one knows I live 'til now except him.
Syafinaz: Why didn't you tell me? How could you!
Eddy: Well, I saw you're happy with Amirul and you guys have a kid. I don't wanna take away your happiness.
Syafinaz: Actually she's your baby.
Eddy: What?!
Shakira: Hey, dad!
(cry & hug Eddy)
Syafinaz: So, what now? Where will you go?
Eddy: Go live in Florida with my twin. Try to start anew after all this. I'm glad that they've been caught. Now, I can "rest in peace". Take care. (kiss Syafinaz's cheek)

Then, Eddy and his twin left as the police arrived. Naqib and Afiqah confessed. Everything is back to normal now. Hajar is sent to the hospital and she have to stay there for a week. But, her flight to London is in 2 days.

-End of Season 1-

Will Hajar go to London? Wait for the second season.

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

I'm So Sorry!

I can't update the blog now. I had some request from people to update it but I'm busy with homework. So, perhaps this weekend. We'll see. Until then, just WAIT. haha! :D

I'm really truly sorry for the inconvenience.

Friday, June 12, 2009

New Theme Song

I changed it because I think this song suits better :)

Band: Parachute
Title: Mess I Made


Newlyweds :)

On behalf of my class, I want to wish Cik, wait, PUAN Nur Hamizah bt. Haji Mohd Mahidi and his husband, Syafiq Anwar bin Haji Abdullah, a very happy life as life partners. Harap berkekalan hingga ke anakcucucicit and so on. Sorry we can't make it to your wedding last Saturday (06.06.09). It was all because of transportation problems at the very last minute. But, we're really happy for you ;) Can't wait to see your babies! LOL :D

p/s (to anyone who didn't know who she is): She is our Engineering Drawing teacher.

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Season 1 - Blogisode 5: Coming Back



At school, Shakree got a text message from Hajar:

"I'm goin home. I gotta settle this thing. thx fr ur help! ;)"

At Home

Hajar: I'm home! Anyone here?

Shakira rush to Hajar from the kitchen and hugged her.

Hajar: Mom, you're suffocating me!
Shakira: Oh, I'm sorry! Thank god you're home! We were worried about you. Are you okay?
Hajar: Yes, mom. I'm good. I just need a little time to think about it. It shocked me. duhhh...
Shakira: I understand that. Where did you go? Did you have a good sleep? Have you eaten? What...
Hajar: Mom, please...
Shakira: Sorry, I was just concerned.
Hajar: I'm here. You don't have to worry anymore. So, where's everyone?
Shakira: Your dad had gone to work, grandma gone out and grandpa went to the detective's office for a while. Just to check up on the update of the case.
Hajar: Ouh. Mom, I want to ask you something.
Shakira: What is it?
Hajar: Who's my real parents?
Shakira: I'm surprised to hear that. Well, we don't really know who they are.
Hajar: So, how did you found me?
Shakira: In front of the gate. Your dad came home late that day.


Muiz saw a box that was blocking his way. He went out of the car. Because of it was dark, he couldn't see what's inside. He lift the box and it was heavy. He got infront of his car and saw a baby wrapped in a piece of shabby cloth with blood stains. There was also a note saying,

"Please take care of this baby. I don't know what to do with her. We didn't name her yet. You can give her any name that you like, just help take care of her."

Muiz took it inside and talked with the others. Shakira agreed to keep and raise her as their own because she can't have a baby. The others agreed too.


Hajar: Can we find anyway to find my real parents?
Shakira: I don't know. It's hard. We've tried so many times before and the results are just dissapointing. I'm sorry.
Hajar: It's okay, mom. It's not your fault. If not because of you guys, I can't imagine what will happen to me. Thanks for taking care of me all these years.
Shakira: You don't have to thank me. I volunteered to do it. C'mon, just let go of the past. Put it in a box and throw it far, far away, okay?
Hajar: Okie dokie, mommy. Oh yeah, I was thinking, can I go to London next holiday?
Shakira: Yes, sure. We haven't have a family vacation in a long time!
Hajar: No, mom. I mean, by myself. Maybe I'll take Shakree along. Pretty please. I need to clear up my mind and I can't do it here.
Shakira: Okay, but I don't know if your dad is going to let you go.
Hajar: I know. That's why I need you. Talk to dad and convince him that I'm gonna be okay on my own. I'm not a kid anymore.
Shakira: Well, to us parents, our kids will still be a kid even if they're 60.
Hajar: MOM! Please, please, please convince him.
Shakira: Okay, I'll try my best.
Hajar: Thanks, mom. You're the best!

Hajar went to her room to check on the hotel room, plane tickets, et cetera. She was so excited to go away from the miserable things here and have a time on her own. Of course, she's not taking Shakree along. She just said that to get her parents' trust. Then, she starts packing because holiday starts in 2 days. The only thing on her way now is her dad.


Muiz: Why in the world you want to go there all alone when you can go with us?
Hajar: Dad, don't you understand? I need this. I need to breathe new air and leave all these problems behind for a while.
Shakira: Honey, just let her go. I know she can survive on her own.
Hajar: Yes, dad. You've taught me well. I'll be fine! Anyway, sooner or later, I'm going to live on my own. Why not let me start now so I'll be prepared for the upcoming adventure in life. Pleaseeeeeee......
Muiz: Hmm, you always get your way aren't you? (grin) Okay, okay, you can go.
Hajar: Oh my god, thanks like millions, dad. I love you so much!
Muiz: Yeah, you'll love me because I agree with you. When I don't you'll hate me.
Hajar: Well, I think that's just how teens are. You've been there once, don't you remember how it is?
Muiz: No. It was way too long to remember. Anyway, you need to promise me one thing.
Hajar: What is it?
Muiz: No sex, no booze and definitely no boys. Except for Shakree, though.
Hajar: Certainly. I will hold on to that, sir! Never gonna let it go. (smile) Didn't you said ONE thing? That's THREE!
Muiz: Don't push it. I might change my mind.
Hajar: Yeah, right! hahahahahaha!

-To be continued-

Keep on reading the next blogisode. There will be more adventure for Hajar in London and the murder case of Eddy will be solved. The murderer will be revealed ;)

Monday, June 1, 2009


Theme song is here. I don't know if it suits the drama or not, but it's a good, no, a GREAT song! ;) It's one of my favourite song. This version is from a TV show on FOX (if I'm not mistaken). It's a musical comedy called GLEE. The original song is by JOURNEY. Below is a video of the scene.

Enjoy your socks off :D